All Comments on 'Group Addition'

This is like part four in this saga. Looks like you plan to keep going. And you must!

Another excellent story. Thank you for writing it.

Hmmm, I'm not sure about this one. It was too easy with Meghan, too easy for the other two to get involved. I know what this category is, but I just felt like something was missing between Meghan and Grant to allow this to happen. Also, what about Jen? He miraculously now has no feelings for her? What happened?

Taught globes ?????? who taught them, and what, calculus ???? Or did you mean TAUT, is in tight ??

Ok...the writing is great and the sex is described very well...the first 3 chapters of this saga are among the most enjoyable I've read on this site, BUT i did not like the turn into the group sex here. When the two lesbians stopped having sex with Grant immediately after moving in with him he became very lonely almost despondent. They did not offer him any comfort at that time except to try and find him another woman and telling him to "move on". Now he finally has moved on after months, impossibly he has found another even more beautiful woman, and they had just confessed their love that very night. Suddenly these two bust into his bedroom unrepentant and seduce his girlfriend regardless of his feelings? Knowing that she had previous lesbian proclivities this would be an dangerous and selfish act on these two ladies who supposedly "love" Grant. Jennifer would probably been more respectful of their dynamic and it's fragility especially after he was starting to get over his love for jenn. Idk i loved the writing and the pacing all, but i actually got upset when they bust into the room maybe that's the sign of good writing but it also made me like this story less even though it was a very hot read. Why even introduce the love aspect if it was to go where it was heading. It seems to me that Claire and Beth are just letting him be a part of this foursome so they can bed his gorgeous girlfriend without he being able to get upset about it. I mean it's up to the author to say where this story goes and i respect that, but the feeling i get is that this can only end badly. I mean Grant already has alot going against him in this dynamic. He's much older than all 3 of them, and He's not a woman being two very big hurdles. Then to add another hurdle like this i can only see either heatbreak or his having to accept a lesser role in their affair. This becomes even more evident as in his role with Meg he was the Dominant one but in the foursome scenario he becomes submissive to beth and she takes the Dom role over all of the others. Seeing as this was the main precipitating event that changed their relationship from what would have been a one night stand into an actually real relationship it stands to reason that Megan would shift alot of her attention and emotions over to beth as her new Dominant? No?.....idk I'm kinda just rambling my thoughts about it but hey i liked it enough to immediately start dissecting it so thanks...keep em coming

Not sure why some comments are negative on this, Meg gets to enjoy her bi side, Grant gets more pussy. Both have professed a deep love that allows them to safely enjoy others together. Whilst Jenn was the catalyst, it is quite clear Meg replaced her in Grants feelings, just as Jenn wanted.

Great series that is written superbly. Thank you

Wonderfully done. I hope that you find the time to add to the series. I think Grant and Jen have unresolved issues and I would like to see that play out. Very well written. Thank you very much for sharing.

Interesting very romantic,very over the top with what all. of the friends did together. I completely understand the mind game inside Grants head. Good for him to have such caring friends.

great story and series. Love the way Jen is true to herself throughout

The quality of your writing is excellent. I thoroughly enjoyed the first three stories, but you lost me on the last one. Grant turned almost sadistic in his attitude toward and treatment of Meghan, saying that she was only using him. Uh, where is that coming from? This was their first date. He knew she was on the rebound from a lesbian relationship. They barely knew each other, and she seduced him by telling him how she needed him for a good fucking. They got together for their date and then moved on to intercourse. It seems to me that they got exactly what they wanted and had discussed in detail before the sexual part of their date. Grant moved from happy fucking with his co-workers to angry BDSM with Meghan. I suspect that your writing continued to be excellent throughout this fourth story, but I stopped reading when the BDSM suddenly showed up.

Very hot. Loved the progression. The husband's reaction was totally believable. And Grant's revelation about Meghan's needs was on point. Well done. Excellent. And hot.

D&A

Love reading about Grant!s adventures! Thanks!

Keep writing!!! Please! Set up a patreon so I can contributr!

I’ve enjoyed the series but wtf! Danny is gonna back out and pulls Jen with him wtf? I hope u straighten this out in a future episode, there is no way in hell a married guy, with the blessing of his wife, is going to turn down future group fucks. The guy needs to get some cock up his ass n in his mouth!

Great stories, to be Grant for a weekend!! Keep up the great stories well written.

Nicely done! Very true about once going bi you never go back. Will there be a group holiday in 2022? I certainly hope Jen works her way back into the storyline should there be another episode coming up. Thanks for sharing your talent! 5 stars emphatically!

Really well written, and with nice touches of humour. More please!

Excellent. Funny, highly erotic and of course Grant is living every man’s fantasy. I really miss Jen. She a great character. Bring her back. Soon!

This has been a fitting conclusion to Grant’s saga, which, I might add, I have completed in a single reading, interrupted only by a pleasurable interlude. I have found your characterization and plot development enthralling.

Great story but I would like another turn with Jen, slow burn as you know how to do.

This has been one of the best series I’ve read here! More plzzzz

Superb stuff

The whole series has been great so far, your writing is one of few that deserves 6 stars.

Loved it! Great story and too good to be true!

Just yummy!