All Comments on 'Group Discount'

Loving this series! Grwat characters, great concept and well told! Thank you and please, write faster!

Great chapter and looking forward to more.

This was really hot

Read this with a guy I chat with and we're both so turned on. So damn hot

5 * loved it

Good God. I Didn't think this little tale of yours could get any hotter, but it did. I love how you're slowly giving readers insight into the characters as you develop them. The sex was steamy and bawdy, but there is also a great plot right underneath it all. Excellent job, Dow.

Another great chapter. Thank you.

Fantastic writing.

Some writers on this site have equally sexy ideas for stories, but very few of theirs are as well written. Thank you for your attention to character, dialogue and pacing, and if it’s not too geeky to mention, thanks especially for taking pains with grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.

Amazing. It was a slow draw to a strong climax. Everyone's emotions and feelings were detailed.

Well written and few mistakes. As the character Grant was turned off by women who couldn’t spell correctly in their messaging, so too I don’t like Literotica stories that are full of grammatical errors. This is a breath of fresh air! And sexy as hell! What a lucky guy Grant is! I look forward to reading more of your work!