All Comments on 'Group Project'

Dear LexicalFantasy:

A great story! You write very well. Grant is certainly moving past his grief.

Mission accomplished. A grieving man is brought out of his sadness with some flirtatious outreach by cute and concerned colleagues.

What a great birthday party, especially the end.

I, and probably ll your readers look forward to your next episode, wanting to see what might happen with: Grant and Issa; Grant and Jennifer; and also with Bethany and Claire. The potential combinations are intriguing.

Thank you.ellent.

Really well done. Please keep writing.

Excellent story. Let Issa stay away. Her presence was just enough to show that she isn’t needed. There are enough stories to be told with the colleagues and perhaps their friends or husbands. Keep writing.

Fantastic story. Thank you so much for sharing. I hope you will grace us with more wonderful work in the future.

Ok, but incomplete.

Great story, and we need several sequels. Please keep Issa in the story. Issa needs to be part the future swinging. It will be so much more interesting.

what could have been a great story was ruined being rushed, and the man who was so confident and sexy was turned into a desperate idiot begging to touch Jen in the car. Simply the turn to sex was on the second page too quick, and the story should have been developed more to prepare for that. Jen. herself was made to look like a whore and her sassy sex appeal displayed initially was destroyed.

Utterly exciting!

Interesting premise.

But the sex is much too rushed. Too automatic.

Three stars.

Nice.

Great start! Thanks.

What an amazing erotic tale. The scene in the car was spectacular and then the sex at the end was perfect! Where can coworkers like this be found? I'd quite my job tomorrow if I knew.

Beautifully written and blazing hot!!

That good have just come back a read it again.

I just realized there are more parts to this saga. Can’t wait to read more about Grant!

A hidden gem

Loved it, thanks for writing.

Pretty damn sexy

Arousing

A+ for complexity and development

Incredible build up of passion

What else can I add to the others, maybe that I really, really liked it! Nicely written and I am patiently waiting for more (just like good sex)

That was hot. It was a tad wordy, very descriptive, but extremely hot...especially the 3some with the voyeur. Well do e.

D&A

I'm pleased the back-stories of the characters are slowly emerging along with their current sexual and emotional activities. Oh to be middle-aged again!

I loved the story, which was artfully developed. I am off to see if there are any sequels ....

One of the best and most realistic stories I’ve ever read on here. You have us all wanting to work for that company…or else just wanting to trade places with Grant. And, I believe it goes without mentioning we’d all love to meat Mrs. Jennifer.

Beautifully constructed story and hot as hell. Bravo

I only wish it was longer. My cock enjoyed it.