All Comments on 'Grown Up'

Add a 2nd chapter with mom cucked without getting fucked by Wade. Only thing she gets is to watch Wade take her daughter over and over and do clean up duty on both of them.

Outstanding story i am definitely hoping for a part 2

Keep it up

yeah, no, Cara is right, it's fucked up. Grown ups don't emotionally manipulate their own daughters into having sex with their husbands by ignoring said daughters very real concerns that their mother has abandoned all sense of self and fallen into a toxic relationship. Maybe it isnt toxic, maybe its completely consential and Rena has always been submissive and is only now in a position to live that life and be happy, but a grown up would have mentioned it earlier, a grown up wouldnt have ambushed their daughter with it without warning, a grown up would have told the truth instead of dodging the question when their daughter asked her what was going on, and a grown up wouls certainly not have let their husband fuck their daughter because she wanted to live some weird cuckqueen fetish. 4* for a well written story, but this most definitely isnt "grown up". Id also argue that this belongs in the fetish category instead of incest/taboo because well Cara is an adult when her Rena remarried, so there really isnt a familial incest relationship in this story, and the main story telling device is Rena's fucked up fetish.

Great story, i'd love a continuation where he got Cara pregnant

That was superb. You are a good writer. Very good.

Thanks for an enjoyable story. Not quite the ending I expected, but very enjoyable nonetheless.

Yeah. Not good. A better category is called for.

One of the best stories I ever read, thanks a lot for that! And it is so real in several relationships, but only few people would dare to think about entirely. But you did and also created a beautiful happy ending! Great writing, thanks again!

Need a second chapter with wade and Cara cucking her mother and Cara dominating her maybe even wade breeding Cara that would be hot

In my opinion, this is perhaps one of the more talented writers on this site.

Even when the flavor of kink is not to my taste, this gifted storyteller compels you to read on.

I look forward to diving into something else by oneagainst.

That was awesome! Unexpected and hot, yet loving.

This was amazing. I loved the way you handled the daughter. Her ‘I’m-empowered-and-I-know-what-a-woman-should-want’ attitude and her assumption that her mother only changed for the worst was well executed.

Cuckquean story with a twist… one where beyond the taboo, it is the cuckcake that feels used in the end. Going for the title King of the Cuckqueaning Genre? You have it already, I believe.

Excellent story! Love the premise. Wonderful writing.

For once, I'm looking forward to part 2 not just for lascivious sex scenes, but also to hear the mom explain the truth to her daughter.

I hope there will be more so we can see how this story develops.

A very nice and slow burn to the beginning and then the build-up at the end... keep up the good work!

More.

An excellent story, well told. More like this, please. Well worth all five stars, more if they were available.

Awesome, and is so well conceived and written that transcends simple incest. More like three very sex-hungry adults looking for satisfaction without inhibition.

Great ending...