All Comments on 'Growth and Lust'

I've seen many first stories on here and very few of then match the quality of this one; you should be proud of it.

I'll give it five stars, everyone on here loves long stories and this one certainly fits the bill.

I would think they would have a better return on investment for terraforming a world. Some of the numbers seemed a bit off.

It also would have been nice had the character been sucked off by an octopus like entity.

Great story. 5stars please keep going, don’t leave us hanging!

Excellent first story here and one I wouldn't mind being extended by another chapter or two.

Great story, five stars for sure.

A nice start. Though I recommend getting an editor to check your work as there are many grammatical and spelling errors that should be easily corrected. Four stars.