All Comments on 'Guarded: Neon Sunset Ep. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Enjoying this tale

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Shallow characters

She’s no better than him. Both shallow, aggressive asses. A bitter silent type would’ve been more likeable and relatable, and have her slowly thaw. 10 years is a long time to still have that level of anger because it’s too exhausting to maintain. It would warp into self destructive behaviour in some form. Is your character based on a stereotypical aggressive African American woman?? I want to feel empathy for her but she’s awful.

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