All Comments on 'Guardian Angel Ch. 03'

by candiecane76

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
This story is fantastic

I wish I had your talent for writing, I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Totally love it. Thank you for writing. Looking forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it

I was looking through the new stories when i saw that you had written a new one i was so excited i loved it!!! keep makin em!!

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonover 16 years ago
Sweet

Such a cute story. Definitely keep them coming. The relationshop between Galen and Quinn is so beautiful.

tiabella30tiabella30about 15 years ago
Amazing!

Love this series!!! Had me smiling, laughing, crying... Amazing!!!

Soliloquy_DawnSoliloquy_Dawnabout 13 years ago

i adore this series i was so sad that it had to end but the way it ended was a real tear jerker

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

this is grinding on me now.?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Perhaps you might try a totally different approach?

This story would be so much better as an audio with voice actors willing to play along. It strains the eyes to sit and review page after page of it. Only truly skilled writing is worth such a sacrifice. Remember your work is designed to create a sexual fantasy your audience can visualize and get off on. How do you expect people to pleasure themselves if they have to carefully look at small print with one hand on the mouse and another on their flag pole?

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