All Comments on 'Guardian Ch. 01'

Sorry, just too long.

They need to wear committment rings, at the very least. Of course after a ceremony. Can't wait for the 2nd part!

Soon I hope. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out

Well written-throughly enjoyed all the sentiment —looking forward to next chapter-thank you

What an excellent story so far! To bad the father didn't get some jail time for the abuse his wife endured!

Although i get feeling father is not finished and up to something.

Spectacular and waiting for next part to be released!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

What a lovely story! Erotic, sensual and heartfelt. Looking forward to the rest!

Tropic humidity inducing story!

What name did you write your previous stories under?

Great story, great writing. A shame it is mother/son. But a cracking story just the same.

4/5

Very good story. Well written.

Nice story, I could go a second helping! Looking forward to chapter 2.

Cheers

SAGE

Don't get discouraged by people saying it's too long. I enjoy long stories noee. I usually just skip anything under 4 pages.

Once again another fantastic story!

I so appreciate your time and effort’s to give us great stories!!!

Thanks for a very nice story.

Too long and drawn out.

Another fantastic story. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

Wonderful story. I love how you brought the characters to life.

DocWords

5 stars. A lovely loving story, rich with sex and passion. NOT too long (what a ridiculous complaint!)

Only two things threw me out of the narrative from time to time: (1) The occasional run-on sentence that tripped up the rhythm of the story, and (2) the heavy overuse of the words "simply" and "just." (If you delete 90-100% of those from this text, it would be so much stronger.)

Neither of these things are worth removing a star, however. I just hope you'll check for them for chapter 2. Looking forward to it!

O.F.

Beautiful

Beautiful it so much reminds me of mi and my mother We Were Lovers for 15 years before she passed and yes we did everything that this couple did

"I had been told to never kick a man when he was down."

Why not? Sergeant Fred Colon and Nobby Nobbs would tell you that's the best time - it's easier to get to the important bits.

5 stars. If anything could have been a couple of pages shorter

When the author decided to make mom barren that made it a 4 star story for me.

5 stars. I love mom/son romance. One of the best stories on the site. Perfect.

Beautiful incestuous love story between mother and son who adore, respect, and emotionally care about each other more than they care about themselves. The purity and honesty of passion, intimacy, and sensitivity between the lovers is beautiful. A 5 starseries.

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

I was hoping Robert would somehow discover their secret and expose them so the son had to deal with him with extreme prejudice.

Beautiful story. Top 10 on the entire site.

overabundance of sex and about 3 pages too long. who would give up 1/2 of the $ assets and 1/2 of the house? really?

Good story with a nice amount of build up can't wait to read the next chapter

A very good story , AAAAAA+++++

This was a good story I like the tag for it as well this is how it should be when in the face of a bully I don't understand how all these stories about a bully on this site has the mother betraying her son without a care in the world or a sister betraying her brother without a care in the world there is so many of them it's like they believe that is what a mother does or what a sister does as well as it is almost like they believe that is what makes a man is bullying someone all you writers out there that has wrote stories like that can take a lesson or 2 from this story and the writer himself/herself when it comes to writing about bullying, you stand up to the bully just once I promise you it will stop cause it's no longer fun for them someone who bullies someone is no man there just a little bitch who wouldn't last 5 minutes in real mans world

Dirtyoldbiman no 1 wants to give it up but will agree to it when realized they don't have a choice cause every state except for 2 is a no fault state which means there giving up 50 percent of the accests anyways and the woman most always gets the house so there is that as well no 1 wants to give it up but they have no choice in the grounds of a divorce unless a prenup is in place and in this story a prenup was not mentioned

Man that father is a real piece of work. I swear you wrote him in the worst way to try to make us hate him as much as possible. The lowest of lowlife scum. People like that make me sick. What on Earth did the mother ever see in him I wonder? The fact that he brags about fucking all sorts of women... no doubt he intimidates and manipulates them into it. There is no way he'd get any real affection without some master-class deception, and honestly he's not that smart. What a pitiful excuse for a human being.

The build up to sex between Mark and his mum kept going and going. Then he asks her to wait longer. Ugh you're killing me here. I agree with some of the comments that story was a little longer than it had to be. Some of the fluff could have been removed, but I enjoyed all of the romantic and confession bits. The romantic vibe of this was pretty high up there. I loved it. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. 5/5 so far. The mom can't have more kids right? Wonder if they'll adopt or something.

Oh, and that mention of Jamie Lee Curtis in True Lies... shit, one of my favourite movies of all time, and one of the most erotic scenes in any movie ever (even with the hiccup of falling from the bedpost, which honestly just made it better, somehow). I still remember it clear as day and I've not seen the movie in a few years. I'll need to watch it again soon. I love that damn movie!

Awesome story loved it and loved the way he took care of his worthless father she should have let him beat the shit out of him!!!! 5 stars and ready for part 2

Loved it but as an ex rugby player making love in a car with a broken rib, she should be prosecuted for child cruelty

A true romance story between mom and her son.