All Comments on 'Guess What I Saw? Ch. 05'

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wolfgirlbiteswolfgirlbitesover 10 years ago

Now that makes up for the last one:)

ErotickWriterErotickWriterover 10 years agoAuthor
I'm Glad!

I hope I'm forgiven! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
well done!!!

A wonderful culmination of this series, but please, please, please write a follow-up or three about bringing Kayla into the mix...did I say please enough??? Again, thanks for the great series, good mix of plot emotion and hot eroticism and it is nice to read a story on lit without having to constantly re-read passages that don't make sense because of grammatical inconsistencies. Thank you!!!

sandymonroesandymonroeover 10 years ago

It was so hot! The innocent yet nasty girl... wow! Please continue!

ErotickWriterErotickWriterover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks Anon and Sandy Monroe. I am considering continuing the series. Glad to know there is some interest in it. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Just plain silly

And even for fiction, highly implausible. I'm actually laughing at how silly it was.

lowkeyonelowkeyoneover 8 years ago
WOW

Thank you, that was great. I thought these types of stories were supposed to be fantasies, not real life ??

babaloo92babaloo92over 4 years ago
Excellent 👍

Holy cow. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Almost too much going on here!! Still, you got into this almost unbelievable finish without being totally implausible.

One great read and even hotter once his wife got into the play...yummy.

ErotickWriterErotickWriterabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks, Anon. :)

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