by ErotickWriter
A wonderful culmination of this series, but please, please, please write a follow-up or three about bringing Kayla into the mix...did I say please enough??? Again, thanks for the great series, good mix of plot emotion and hot eroticism and it is nice to read a story on lit without having to constantly re-read passages that don't make sense because of grammatical inconsistencies. Thank you!!!
Thanks Anon and Sandy Monroe. I am considering continuing the series. Glad to know there is some interest in it. :)
And even for fiction, highly implausible. I'm actually laughing at how silly it was.
Thank you, that was great. I thought these types of stories were supposed to be fantasies, not real life ??
Almost too much going on here!! Still, you got into this almost unbelievable finish without being totally implausible.
One great read and even hotter once his wife got into the play...yummy.