by Publius68
Loving it. Nutty as a pint of squirrel vomit, but fun to read. One request though; please don't let him reconcile with his slut of a wife. From what she's even admitted of her promiscuity as a married woman, as a single divorcee she's probably riddled with mutiple STIs by now.
When I saw this in the group sex category I thought it was going to be Wanda with Clark and Yancey. I hoped it was going to be Clark with Wanda and Yancey. It would be great if it were Yancey with Wanda and Clark. You get the idea. I hope you get the idea. You don’t write much pain inducing sex, but all three of the aforementioned, one wearing an attachment, making Rebecca water tight. Yeah, that’d be a fun read.
Great writing, fitting a luridly lively imagination. Congrats for a great read.
Do NOT add Becca to the mix. The storyline doesn’t need it. Awesome job, by the way.
I'm pretty sure that Becca being in the mix is the THAT that was explicitly stated that it's not going to go to in the intro of all of these chapters.
Also, I don't want to see the MMC have sex with Rebecca again, even if it's angry sex. She's ruined that ship, set it on fire, scuttled it, raised it from the depths, and then blew it up.
Correction - it says it's not going to go THERE. I'm pretty sure Becca is the THERE, not the THAT. My apologies.
Keep this series going please, you have many many options left to pursue! Great writing!
Gees!! What a story!! So off the wall it could be real (in this day and time). I can see him with the younger girls the age of his daughter especially if he's the kind of dad that took care of himself, but the next door neighbor wife with permission?? Still an awesome job of writing though, good job. Looking forward to the next edition(s)!!!!
I just logged off and voted an additional 5 stars anonymously.
I thought about starting an additional 20 accounts and voting 20 more times, but I’m too lazy.
It was that good.
Too late now, but I hope they hear that Bob is much improved as Mary has learnt from being a pupil that she can become a teacher, for both her and her fellow girls benefit. Oh and Bob's as well!
Truly enjoyed this chapter. I laugh out loud with each chapter but this one had me laughing throughout. All the while a well-written sexy story. If only, you know.