All Comments on 'Guilty x Creatures Ch. 73'

I love how you have developed the characters of Fiona and Kianna throughout this story and am very interested to see where Olivia's tale takes them. It's obviously going to be devastating at first (as such revelations would be to anyone about their origins and past), but its where it goes after the initial shock that's going to be very interesting indeed.

Keep up the good work as this is one of my 2 or 3 fav stories here on lit among the dozens and dozens I have read.

Im.very much enjoying the stories. Character development and your writing are great. I do think your chapters are a bit small especially if wanting people to go to patreon. I'd think 15k to 20k words is a good chapter size. But just my opinion.

i'm little bit sad that you skipped al the action. i was really looking forwar to reading how their engagement turned out. sad