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sadlittlelostboyalmost 8 years ago"You wanna hear how I got here?"
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Great story, but please edit more carefully next time!?
Pastel_Commaalmost 8 years agoAuthorThanks For Checking Out This Story
Like the title says.
Anyways, I've gotten comments about cleaner edits on some my other works too. Another one of my shorts is in the queue and on its way but for the ones after that, I'll try the volunteer editing program/service.
If any of you readers feel chatty, which kink did you like the most? I'd like to use your input for future stories and shorts.
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