All Comments on 'Guns and Dust Ch. 07'

Strong and coherent story line, with just a hint of fudging to cover the cracks between reality and fervid imagination!

However the story consistency carries the plot nicely over the very small stumbles, and is good value for the five pointy things this will most probably deserve when it gets finished!

Thanks for this wonderful adventure. Cya in Jan. 20!

One of the best post-appocalyptic story I ever read

And it get better with every chapter you post here...

Thanks for sharing whit us

I have truly enjoyed discovering your writing. Guns and Dust is well written, and I find this world of yours captivating. I’m really looking forward to your next chapter. Definitely worth all the stars I can give and a follow.

I have really enjoyed your story so much, I was reading it every spare moment I had. The characters and settings are very well done, I could totally picture them are I was reading it. Good luck with your classes and I look forward to seeing you continue the story. Thank you.

Will be waiting for the next installment

Great character development - very engaging story! Thanks for doing this and looking forward to more.

Hoping for more soon and that the classes were worthwhile.

I’m glad these people are trying to setup a permanent settlement otherwise I don’t think your Eugenics experiment works. Kids are necessary but they take resources and time to be beneficial to the tribe. Historically, gender disparity in more the driver for “interesting” behaviors. The last I read about was Germany after wwii when a push was made to only allow males to stay married for a few years at a time.

*****Another great chapter. Thanks for sharing.

I've read a few great sci-fi stories on here but didn't find this one until I typed in "post-apocalyptic" in the tag. Love this story, love the excellent writing. Was a little disappointed in not seeing Asher take advantage of "breeding" some of the caravan's ladies... oh well! Normally I get irritated in the Sci-Fi genre when there is so much repetitive sex that it takes away from the story, but you've achieved the perfect balance for me at least. Having a blast reading this... look forward to more!