All Comments on 'Guys' Retreat Pt. 04'

by Cyanlot

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Rwa4768Rwa4768about 4 years ago

My only complaint is that the chapters are too short. I just started getting into it good and it is over.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Friends?

With " FRIENDS" like that he doesn't need any enemies. they are disgusting SOBs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Getting there

These new things might take some time to get used to xxx

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 4 years ago
Need help?

Sine your story "It's Okay" is like my all-time favorite, I'm happily following your latest story, "Guys' Retreat". If you need help editing, proofreading, organizing, let me know. I do suggest you finish the whole thing at home, then post larger chunks here than you have in the past. Dribbling out small loads satisfies no one.

Don

I particularly enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.

You might enjoy one of my stories.

Donald

My stories:https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions

Dratini2011Dratini2011almost 4 years ago

Wheres the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Was a good enough tale until you quit. The story didn't end you just quit writing. You let your readers down.

Anonymous
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