by Cyanlot
My only complaint is that the chapters are too short. I just started getting into it good and it is over.
With " FRIENDS" like that he doesn't need any enemies. they are disgusting SOBs.
Sine your story "It's Okay" is like my all-time favorite, I'm happily following your latest story, "Guys' Retreat". If you need help editing, proofreading, organizing, let me know. I do suggest you finish the whole thing at home, then post larger chunks here than you have in the past. Dribbling out small loads satisfies no one.
Don
I particularly enjoy stories about "straight" men who get bent over and go gay. I'm double-hard if their sexual humiliation is witnessed by others - spouse, family, friends, coworkers.
You might enjoy one of my stories.
Donald
My stories:https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=789392&page=submissions
Was a good enough tale until you quit. The story didn't end you just quit writing. You let your readers down.