All Comments on 'Gwen's Kitchen'

lol what

A few men can write about Lesbian encounters and create something believable. This was poorly conceived, horribly written and edited by an illiterate. It is an embarrassment.

I couldn't get into the fantasy and forget that these are two fictional women. The wording is bland and uncolorful.

Eew, gross ending. :/ Could have used more detail, it was a bit blunt. But otherwise it was a half-decent read.

wat a story i mean the end was a true horny bit it made my cock harden, hope you could continue it with something even more HORNY!

Good story. Well-written. Good stuff !!! I would love to read a sequel. I am a bi-sexual black man in real life. It's all okay by me. Guy/girl action is cool. Guy/guy action is cool. Girl/girl action is super cool !!!! Keep writing !!!!