All Comments on 'Gwyneth'

Not bad although I thought the ending lacked a punch, also it would have been better if her earlier life had been clearer. Still a good first attempt.

Very nice romance! However, the devil is in the details and you mixed up your and you're three times and Charlie and Charlie and Couter quite a bit.

this was exellent please write more

Lovely story! A little hastly ending though :( But still a five. Looking forward for your next piece.

Great story, great balance between good and bad

Thanks all for your positive comments. It encourages me to submit again. I'll try and work on a more riveting ending. Interesting that there was a very negative comment from Anonymous. I guess there is no accounting for taste, but I am wondering what their agenda might be.

I enjoyed the story. I found it a fun story. I thought the ending was a bit short. All in all it was worth reading. There were a couple of mistakes that were not caught by not double checking your writing. I give it a 5

Very Hot and fun story, 5 stars worth. After marriage, and kids, will we read a Loving Wife story involving this threesome getting it on some more, only this time Charlie gets to fuck her too. Hot!

Great story, thoroughly enjoyed it, re Gwyneth loving the family dinner etc, I’ve known people with awful family lives and if they’re exposed to a healthy, happy family they absolutely thrive on it and they grow massively as a person because of it, I love that she was exposed to fun, wonderful outdoor pursuits and revelled in them, it doesn’t take much of an opportunity for someone with a home life such as hers to grab something good and make the most of it.

If I’m being picky, I think the end of the story deserved more, winding it up as you did feels a touch brief, fleshing out them ending school and moving onward wouldn’t have been easy, especially with Gwyneth trying for the Police and the training/commitment that would require.

Many thanks for posting, 5⭐️ cheers Ppfzz.

Thanks for that. Gwyneth was a true character, very much a loner. Her supposed involvement with a teacher made her a bit of an outcast and I considered myself very lucky to become her friend and then lover. We remained friends for a long time (and got together again when I returned from Australia) Gwyneth was always welcomed at the family home where she would go for advice from my parents, loving the family environment that she never had. Even ended up calling my mother "Mum". Perhaps in the future I will write about how things evolved with her.

Great story

Fun and got story. Thanks!