All Comments on 'Gym Shower'

That was really good

Kept my attention the entire time! that was excellent! compelling from the beginning to the end

This story had a really great begining and build-up. Great back-story and development of character & situation. However the climax of the story could have been extended and used some development. The ending was to abrupt also.

The storyline has a lot of potential, and it's not hackneyed. But it is not developed enough. The physical contact in the showers could have progressed in gradual phases.

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I wish the author, who is technically competent, would try this storyline once more.

. . . and your continuing stories only shows your outstanding talent. I gave it Five Stars even though you never mention her fluffy, thick 2003 pubes.