All Comments on 'Gypsy Designs Ch. 13'

Great work, glad to see the chapters coming.

Overall it was another great chapter.

But he still hasn't told her that he loves her, the idiot! I enjoyed this chapter. Thank you.

It's getting slightly complicating/hard to conentrate on the different characters. I'm still loving it though, but want to encourage you to keep it clean/focused. I guess it would seem more easy to follow if the chapters were read all in one sitting, so I don't want to be too critcial. This still is my favourite story to follow at the moment .

I love how the story is going.I like that you have included other charters that may lead to other stories.

I can't stand to wait...what happens next?