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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
anon

What does She mean does he want her number I mean they are next door neighbors for goodness sakes :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Keep It Going

Great Work!! Your doing great don't stop. I like your story telling style!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Just in time for Valentine's

Just want you to know I support you and this series, looking forward to its continuation and many various other additions you may have in store.

EricasDreamsEricasDreamsabout 4 years ago
Very Hot!

I really liked the playfulness of the language, I.e. “big black cop plowing a little white girl,” not to mention the vivid descriptions of what Hailey feels.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More

This makes me so hard.love the writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love This Series

I can’t tell you how much I have loved reading this series so far. The writing is excellent. It is easy to follow. Love how descriptive the stories are. The humor is great - “‘But for real, you need to stop speeding,’ he said after a while.” It cracks me up. And, I love how Mr Chapman treats Hailey. She doesn’t seem objectified at all. I haven’t been able to stop thinking about them. Please continue this series!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great storyteller.

Sensual, visceral, raw sexuality.. this checks all ther boxes. More of the same, please!!

Shadowforce1Shadowforce1about 4 years ago
Loveable

I like your loveable and believable characters. Glad to see another part of your series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Great story just like the rest of em! Love all the details and especially the ones that describe the taste of his cum! I know a black man who tastes just like that! Yummmmm

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Love it!

Love it! Keep going!

HardBenHardBenabout 4 years ago
SOOOO GOOD

Hailey is just unbelievably gorgeous.

This is getting better and better,

I love your brilliant descriptive writing.

XXX

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your description is very well enjoyed. Thank your author.

blackknight314blackknight31412 months ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

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