All Comments on 'Halfbreed Ch. 01'

For those of you longtime readers confused as to the reappearance of Halfbreed on Lit, I have heavily edited the early chapters and am re-releasing them on a monthly basis. Check my profile's biography for more details.

I am glad it came back it was a good series.

Dear HookedonPhoenix, I am so scared to start reading this story! I dont know if you continue or abandon it? I still keep on rereading Song of Roland and getting disappointed on its unfinished end.

I was going to say what happened!? lol love your writing, I need to do this with my early stories or just need to write anything, me slacker!

In response to the "What about Song of Roland?" comment.

The short answer? Work happened. I'm currently juggling several writing gigs while also attempting to put out my Patreon, hence the lack of posting of either Halfbreed or Song of Roland.

Song of Roland is on a temporary hiatus, but I want to stress the temporary aspect of it. I fully intend to go back and heavily edit, and then finish the Song of Roland series. In the short term, it was simply a division of labor I couldn't afford, but rest assured I intend to finish it as well.

For now, content yourself with some new and improved Halfbreed chapters! The novel's already nearing completion.

Perhaps you could make the princess at the beginning a little older? Helps me like the MC and sympathize with him if I know he's not a pedophile.

Other than that it's an interesting story with only a few grammar errors.

Good writing but I'm not a fan of the catastrophic start to the story nor the ultra-slow burn undertones.