All Comments on 'Halfbreed Ch. 01'

OK. I'm interested. You drew me in, now I want to know more. Soon please.

You write well, engaging the reader. Thank you.

Nice start. I can already see possibilities of future stories involving his "brothers"(?)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well written flows well , love the comment Shygirlost left and I must say I feel the same . 5 Stars too .

Thanks for the read looking forward to a great series !

tx cracker

Shouldn't add the brothers to sexual activities would ruin the story

Thank you all for the feedback. I have submitted a bit more of the story, Ch. 02 should appear soon. Hope you guys enjoy getting to know Lorena and Liam.

(ps: don't worry Anom, I don't see any orgies in Lorena's future...)

Hi :)

This little story grew and grew, so much that it turned into a book. In case you have read this and would like to know where the story goes, the first book is available on kindle.

"Marked" by Karla Santiago - Book One of the Halfbreed Trilogy

http://www.amazon.com/dp/B07D1MBQXZ