All Comments on 'Halfbreed Ch. 02'

This is very good.

I want to keep reading.

I especially liked the contrivance of having only one translator working.

I’d enjoy it even more if it was about 200 pages longer!

Isn't this a repost? I feel like I've read this story before.

was this re-published? I thought I remembered reading this and chapter 3 here a while back?

For those of you longtime readers confused as to the reappearance of Halfbreed on Lit, I have heavily edited the early chapters and am re-releasing them on a monthly basis. Check my profile's biography for more details.

Couldn't they share one earbud each? Mike seems like a dumbass in any event.