All Comments on 'Halfbreed Ch. 04'

For those of you longtime readers confused as to the reappearance of Halfbreed on Lit, I have heavily edited the early chapters and am re-releasing them on a monthly basis. Check my profile's biography for more details.

I hope we will be graced with many more chapters on how this relationship develops and what adventures they have traveling through space.

I cant wait till you add more chapters...

Love the story tho

Hmm, pillows, sheets, blanket, Carpet, Light switch, LMAO! That's no jail cell I've ever seen. Them are some civilized Orcs' on that planet. Five Stars for the laughs, and the Elf sex.

Hey Folks! Just commenting since a few people mentioned it.

The 'jail cell' isn't a jail cell, hence the comfortable accomodations. It is an abandoned Elven Embassy holding cell (see: comfortable confinement) that the Orcs used to confine two fugitives, as their culture has no use for normal forms of confinement and thus they didn't have a better one.

Sorry, should have made that more clear in the text!

> coup de gras

You meant "coup de grâce", "gras" is "fat", and not quite suited to the expression.

A long time in coming, no pun intended, so don't fuck it up now Mick.

That seemed to happen out of nowhere...not even a hug or a kiss beforehand. Finally though!