All Comments on 'Hall Pass'

Another black man cucks a white wimp husband nothing new here just another cuck writer who has a queen of spades ♠️ whore wife.

A lying whore and cheating slut is born……

One of the best descriptions of a woman's sexual ecstacy I've ever read. 5*s

If she has a Hall Pass, it's not cheating.

What a crock of shit.

so nit Peter's stupid ass is hiv positive but she a lair to boot. So much for a hall pass stupid.

Loved this story thank you for your time and effort. Chapter 2 maybe. I think she'd like to do some more

A really stupid cuck story. The author should change his name to "Philippe: the Cuck Moron". Seriously Literotica should open a category for "Willing Cuckold" stories and let LW be about other affairs so people don't get sick reading that garbage.

Is she really a married woman? She acts like some 17 year old teenager. A spoilt, stupid, childish idiot who gets drunk in a cafe by herself, allows herself to be picked up by a stranger, has a full meal very late in the afternoon up until 7pm (remember she is meant to be having an evening meal with her husband at 8 pm) then goes to a disco at the time she is meant to meeting her husband. But asking her pickup to get a condom, obviously to fuck her, just defies belief. Plus to have the bartender join them and her fuckbuddy says they will "share" a condom to fuck her... I mean, she must be retarded! Just a ridiculous story.

You think a husband wouldn’t notice she was just fucked and creampied moments ago? For those who’ve never had sex before: there’s a HUGE difference between semen and vaginal secretions - especially the smell.

End of marriage

I don't like stories where people speak untranslated French as most of us do not know French and we are obviously missing conversation.

I do not think that the story is realistic, because there is nothing that would suggest that this wife would act as she did. But, it is author's story , and the wife has obviously not honored the terms of the hall pass by not using condoms and not telling her husband the truth. She is plainly nothing more than a cheating slut, and, hopefully, the husband will soon know.

The dead give away will be the kid with the strange DNA

I don't understand. He gave her a hall pass. He gave her permission. Why does the author describe her as cheating, engaging in an act of infidelity?Which is it? Make up your mind.

TRASH

Wow. This was so bad it made stupid look good.

Her husband gives her a hall pass but asks she be honest. And instead she lies! She's not a good woman. Definitely not a good wife.

He gave her two rules. Play safe and tell him everything. Whore couldn’t do either.

That was well done. I gave it a 5* to offset the inevitable shit you're going to take for posting it. Especially the racist bigots that scream the "Interracial" category.

No man can fail to notice the difference between a very wet pussy and sloppy seconds. The only surprise is that you didn’t have her husband eat up her creampie.

1 star to off set the sissy cowards who think this is good.

The whole premise is badly flawed, the author expects everyone to completely suspend belief in normality. What kind of husband behaves in such a manner.

Unprotected sex with two complete strangers, especially in such an environment. STD’s abound, unwanted pregnancies. Sorry but no.

Hall pass has rules. She was unprepared to follow the rules, and ultimately did not. Hope she does not contract anything but divorce papers.

She proved she's nothing but a whore. What will her husband say if she's knocked up and has a checkered flag?

She lied and will keep on lying. The love part she says she Has for her husband is totally a fantasy. They would be divorced in a few years if this was real life

It was probably a great story for guys who let their wives cheat but for me it was a waste of time. I think some authors right this stuff just to get a rise out of commentators

As soon as she disrespect the 2 rules, this marriage was over, because the husband will find out. Bad story with worst characters!

Wow this is truly a story. She just had to be honest but you had to make her a cheating cunt. Way to go, you deserve the shit you'll get for this cucky boy.

And this is where you wimpy sissies get the moniker mentally ill from. Being cheated on and loving it is the sign of some one seriously fucked up upstairs. Walk away skippy, and go masturbate with some 4X steel wool.

"If she has a Hall Pass, it's not cheating."

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It is when the Hall Pass comes with conditions and she breaks them.

I thought it strange that the husband didn't notice the lack of panties, a swollen pussy, (full of cum,) and marks all over her body. The writer doesn't mention marks but his description of the sex makes them inevitable.

It started off well but petered out. Didn't even mention pregnancy.

Altogether, rather unsatisfactory. No way 5 stars! 3 is generous.

I wish Literotica would just create a "Cuckold stories" category, as most of the stories in "Loving Wives" are cuckold stories like this one. I hope she enjoys her divorce, because that'll be coming after the black baby she's now carrying is born. Then her husband will know she cucked him for 2 bigger dicks. It's not bad enough that she lied about having sex, but she lied about having safe sex. I hope the husband gets tested for STDs when he gets back home. When will these "Loving Wives" learn that just because you have a "hall pass", doesn't mean you need to use it. It's also as bad as breaking your wedding vows, especially if you're the one cheating and lying. She must have really liked being prostituted, or at least we'll find that out in chapter 2 when she does more guys from the dance club, furthering her cucking her husband (who she claims to love).

4 questions and all with the same answer: 1 - Did the wife love her husband? Hell NO! 2- Did she respect him? Hell NO! Did she respect herself as a woman? Hell NO! Was this a good story? Hell NO! This marriage will end badly when she has to tell him how she got a STD! 1*

There has to be at least one every day.

Great story please write the next part soon

There's no end of idiocy in LW

Stupid, lying slut

Sure, why not? Golf clubs, bass boat, hunting dog, wife; just return them in decent condition. And have fun.

Great story. Would you please post your wife's cell phone number?

Thanks for the effort.

Je vous remercie, Pjilippe; formidable!

Stupid story about a stupid man who makes a stupid agreement with his stupid wife who can't even follow two stupid (?) rules to prevent her from obtaining two stupid, unwanted souvenirs. An STD and an unwanted biracial baby! Really stupid!

This should be in Feitish, not LW.

A marriage that isn't going to go well. She's already a liar and cheat. And, so easy she will certainly do it again. Of course Peter is a dumb fuck who set it all in motion, what the hell did he think could happen.

A "hall pass" and she's too stupid to CARRY condoms and too brain dead to REFUSE sex without them. Then, she lies. As has been stated, she only had to be 'safe' and not lie. 'Liar' has a new illustration in the dictionary.

Martian slut ray makes another appearance!

Scandal! Love it!

WACC. hmmm were have I read this plot line before .... Oh, never mind.

"He gave her a hall pass. He gave her permission. Why does the author describe her as cheating, engaging in an act of infidelity?".

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What's hard to understand? The hall pass, the permission, had conditions. She didn't abide by the conditions. THAT'S why it's cheating.

Oh that was delicious

It’s funny how one loser commented that he wanted Literotica to create a Cuckold category because most of the stories in Loving wives are that type. Well, dumbass, maybe that’s because that’s what this category is about. And if 95 percent of the stories are like that, then maybe they need to create a BTB category for the other 5 percent of losers. Got these idiots never cease to amaze me with their constant whining.

And after the three days are over?

Re: anonymous, It's funny how one loser commented........ Yes some idiots never cease to amaze me with their constant whining. What did you just do? It appears the dumb ass is you. Care to enlighten us loser?

You got to love the comments, more entertaining then most of the garbage stories posted in loving wives. One loser actually bitched about not needing a "cuckold" category. Yes idiot, the Loving Wives category is about cheating wives, but there is a big difference between cheating and the willing cuckoldry stories where the partners are actually getting off turning wives into sluts/whores for others. I'd call that a fucking fetish. I guess you don't spend much time on other sites and how they categorize stories. Literotica, for some reason, likes to throw all stories into categories where they don't belong. Yes, idiots never seize to amaze me either.

Typical LW trash. It will never make it close to the "hall of fame" stories of this category.

Only.in a trash story.like this do you turn up a colored boy named Serge.

Really just another slut.

Bullshit

PUT A BULLET BETWEEN HER EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Que sera sera.

Chuckling at the previously written comments. There are two more days left on her hall pass. Write about what she did in the following days, does Serge find her? Does she go back to the cafe for round 2 with someone new? Or goes to a beach?

So... she got hit with a Martian Slut Ray and went WAY PAST the rules her husband srt when he gave her the Hall Pass.

What happens she turns up either pregnant or with some form of STD ?

Hubby set it up by assuming she could control herself... you almost think he deserves whatever happened, but only almost.

The majority of the story was a mediocre version of a hall pass story.

The ending was beyond ridiculous. She gets back to the hotel more than two hours after she was supposed to, no underwear on, no wedding ring on, sporting a huge hickey, dripping two loads of cum out of her and stretched out from more than two hours of fucking two of the biggest cocks she's ever seen and Peter notices none of it.

Playing up the clueless, loving husband is one thing ... This goes so far past it's not conceivable.

Not worth commenting on. A really dumb "hall pass story". 2*

Same old, same old stupid cliches. The author has a low opinion of women, especially their intelligence. What makes you think that attractive, intelligent women are attracted to a category of men characterized by low IQs, poor impulse control, criminality, and high rates of STDs? You must have a teeny weenie or are queer, because the "big cock" nonsense has nothing to do with what women want in a sexual partner. In fact, a gigantic cock is a major bug, not a feature.

It’s not cheating if you tell the truth.

She should have told him the truth.

Big black clown named Sirgay?

Don't bother

Just another slut and wimpy cuckold

It's a big black clown named Surge.

Jill wised up and realized she was married to a sissy wimp cuck and not a man at all. She lost all respect for her dickless husband Peter and began to despise him. Two weeks after coming home she handed him divorce papers. Peter cried and cried, but she just laughed in his face. "You're a pathetic loser, not a man. You let me fuck around on you even encouraging me. What a joke of a man. I can't believe I didn't see it before." She cleaned him out financially and destroyed him emotionally and enjoyed every minute of it. She then returned to the real men she'd met in Martinique!

Have to agree with the comments from the last commentator, How can any real woman respect? The man in her life. Have you such a p**** that you willingly? And with no real effort at all gives away his rights to her p**** to somebody else. Who in no way ship perform is done anything to earn it. That's the main thing that you little sissy, wimpy beta boy bitches don't understand a real woman wants a real man.