All Comments on 'Hallelujah Ch. 04'

I love how he reacted to the lawyer and to Jasmine. Can't wait for the next installment.

Very well written with interesting, well fleshed out characters. My thanks to the author.

What do you expect with their IQ of size of their shoe.

This is without a doubt your finest, and one of the best pieces of writing on this site. As good as Rehnquist. Five stars.

Better than Rehnquist

In fact this is about as good of writing as I have seen anywhere. Ideas are clean, characters seem real, plot moves along just right and the dialogue is spot on. You know, I think I liked it. Good job and sorry you aren't still posting.

This woman is not reliable or trustworthy. She's a flake, and is only interested in HER long-term needs and welfare, rather than her partners. And she won't let a little thing like love or her lack thereof to get in the way.

She is mercenary. She dumped him after getting a taste of a richer life and couldn't go back to the salad days pinching pennies in their little NYC apartment. Who needs love when you've got money? She is not worthy of his love and certainly doesn't return it. She must have found out that he is now a producer and wants to hang and see where that goes.

I despise weak men but this is still a great story.

This story is a great read. 5 stars all the way through so far.