All Comments on 'Halloween Gotham Encounter'
by Defluer
- 11 Comments
Anonymousover 4 years agoThey going to go home and have their mom dressed up as Alfred, and she "takes care" of both of them?
WilliedaFoeover 4 years agoI thought your portrayal of Lucas in the first few paragraphs could have been done better. Your concept of being thrown by a woman 10 feet into a fence post followed by behavior that highly suggests a concussion, to the point of not being able to stand and walk, then horniness slips in? Nah. At first blush I thought he was a sissy boy!
All the sex writing was great! Loved those parts! 4/5 stars.
Anonymousover 4 years agoThat's how you referred to me in response to your party bus story. I like it. Anyway, as to this story, very nice. Would have liked to seen him actually fuck Carly, and the cousins dine on each other, but hey, one can't have everything. It was very nicely done overall. And yes, it definitely fit the category.
It sets itself up for follow up too. What do all the parties think the next day? And do they continue? Cat seems pretty dominant and persuasive, so I could see her face sitting her cousins, but as to the other four, it seems all are a bit reluctant to some degree, so some persuasion would definitely be needed.
Oh, and Cat's cousins. They are her cousins, but what is their relationship to each other? Are they cousins themselves, or are they sisters, which would still make them Cat's cousins. It matters because if sisters, they would see each other daily, thereby adding a whole other perspective to what happens from here.
Just things to consider. Hopefully, you give us updates on this and the party bus group. Great job. You earned these five stars.
Anonymousover 4 years ago"holy incestous offer batgirl" that one got me
I agree best halloween one ive read
bshell47over 3 years agoLove to have a sweet sister like Carlee.
Loved the entire idea.
Pussy galore...a Purrrfect Halloween adventure.
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