by Frankenstein1962
Not the hottest story I’ve read but it genuinely made me smile
Enjoyed it
Definitely 100% loved this story, it was clever and witty with very believable characters. Very well told, and even though someone mentioned typos I honestly didn’t notice any, that said I do tend to autocorrect in my head as I read.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (UK)
I would have liked a little more on the front end but the closing made up for it. Full pull ;)
Innovative
There's nothing like being saved at the last second by a lovely young woman who just kept your balls being smashed by the nut-crushing dean--except for the wonderful sex that just preceded it. Loved the ending.
Good luck in the contest.
This was very well done. It was well written, had a good backstory and engaging characters, and there was some hot action. I really liked the ending, too. Good luck in the contest.
5*
fun story, but you should of double checked it over. don't trust the computer
Very nice, but I don't understand how people can fuck a complete stranger....................guess I'm just a nerd.