All Comments on 'Halloween Tale'

I was waiting for a story like this one looks like bardesade has some competention this year.feel free to make this a series i will love to keep reading.he has a sister you know and dont forget about aunt debbie--BG

I liked this story a lot. I didn't like that the mother got so sick over it initially, but I get you were going for the reality of it.

Keep writing. You have a talent and there is a shortness of good mother/son authors.

The final paragraph knocked me off my seat. BRAVO...the most outstanding story of mother/son I have read in my life...most certainly want to read more now the truth is out and mother can enjoy son's cock along with dad's...OUTSTANDING JOB

a sequel please...

This story appears to have many more chapters available, especially as there is also a sister. Continue

Great story! Right up until the ending. And then it leaves so many questions hanging.

loved the story, did a great job of building it up with a nice twist at the end. Please write more! You're definitely one of the better authors.

Very good story, I can't wait for part 2. Keep them cumming and definitely get the daughter and their friends daughter involved.

You captured lots of realistic feelings about incest, except for the last paragraph. The dad is unrealistically perverse! A great fantasy though!

Can't wait for part 2 cause u left a lot un said so part 2 should be even better waitting.

Great story but definitely want more!!!!

Just an awesome story, but you simply must do a sequel, and very soon. Maybe get the bitchy sister involved too. Great story. 5++

Sure hope this ain't the end!!!! Great story. Thanks.

Amazing story. Very sexy scenario. I liked Jason and his Mom, their actions were true to the world you created. Well done. Hope you write another chapter or three. My only quibble is the last paragraph which seems somewhat out of character for the Dad.

good story, nice little twist. hope to read more- could be very interesting.

Chapter 2: Daddy seduces his little girl. Maybe mom gets to share some as well.

Chapter 3: Daddy & daughter together and mom and & son together. Perhaps even switching off so brother & sister can make the circle of incest complete.

A sweet story with a good and funny twist to the ending.

Thanks for the good read

Thanks for the good read!

Loved the story and hopefully you will continue this! I was expecting the daughter a good looking into lol... Keep the story going!

What a dream cum true getting to fuck your mom and dad finding out with out issues.

That ending made me smile, a great read and very hot!

Realy a great story! Good read. Did I already say it was hot? It is! Love it.

...just so everyone can apologize for their parts in this royal screw-up.

Jason had the opportunity to stop things from happening, just by taking off the costume head. He didn't, and - judging from the story-text - he was still sober enough to know right from wrong.

Mom is guilty of not being honest once she realized her error. Not only did she not tell her husband, but she also failed to talk to her son. And she HAD to know that Jason's avoidance of her was uncharacteristic of him, and thus had to stem from his having a guilty conscience about the incident. She should have at least talked to him, to ease his feelings a bit. Instead, she waits until she realizes that she's now pregnant by him, and needs his help to continue to hide the mistake from her husband.

Apparently, Steve thinks it's cool that Mom roped Jason into being the "man" to help fulfill his fantasy of watching his wife shag another man. But Jason didn't get to hear that, since he fled the room.

It's going to take another chapter just to get the "mess" all cleaned up.

fucking incredible.. we need part 2 xD

5/5

Good job!

The whole story had me glued to the end. The ending was great.

This is one story that keeps your attention to the end. I truly hope that there's going to be a sequel to this one if for no other reason than to see where your imagination takes Jason and his family. Keep up the good work!

i came right in my pants...........

just post its sequel..........

dying to read more of it ............

After a long time I found story is amazing and realistic, not boring.They are out of the ordinary unlike the others whcis are very predictable.Your is fun, exciting and great to read.

its a great story and most have a second part

mabye the son will controle his mother whit his great sex

It is a good story , well written and it holds the readers attention . This story must continue on , especially the love affair that is developing between mother and son . This just can't be a one of . The second part could continue the sex until the delivery . The third chapter could continue with the mother being pregnant again . Looking forward to more .

the father is basically really perverted-he likes to do more than plain sex and is enthusiastic about his son and wife having sex, hes been trying to have children with his wife(wife is now pregnant), so both his dreams came true and seeing that mother/son liked it as well you could make a 2nd chapter about them getting together with maybe a fourth chapter about the slutty "virgin" sister and her role in the new family. It really sucks that you left it open-ended.

Fuck everybody that is criticizing. It was a crazy good story. If you want to continue this story that would be awesome and if not thank you for writing this one.

YOU TOOK THIS STORY OVER THE EDGE, HER REACTION AT THE HALLOWEEN PARTY WAS A GREAT TOUCH THROWING UP IN THE SINK. THE KIDS REACTION WAS A LITTLE DUMB ,BUT THAT'S A KID FOR YOU. I LOVED THE ENDING. IT WAS A REAL SHOCK , IT SEEMS THEY SET THE KID UP. SO IT ALL WORKED OUT FOR THE BEST. AGAIN GREAT STORY. KEEP THEM COMING .A FAN ALWAYS..........LAROC OF AGES

Great! I loved the fact that thhe sister was thrown in as a red herring!

The second chapter could have Jason's mother will come to realize that her husband cannot satisfy her sexually . Jason is able to provide what his mother needs , and with sex during her pregnancy would be interesting addition to a great story .

First off, this story should NOT continue!! I'm not sure how the writer feels about continuing chapter(s); however, my feeling is with the tenor of the reader's comments the story will lose it's true, natural mother and son carnal incest sexual consummation! That would be a travesty for the story to begin with fulfilling wanton and lurid gutter-sex, from the love and romance story--now connected eternally by their sexually procreaton of a child--into a slutty pornographic expose' of deviant and fully disrespectful love of a mother and her son!!! They created their child through the only mechanism available, as lovers and now parents of a child created of their unity of the body, and the union of their baby production methods of sexual copulation and their sexual resources!!

Jason was not aware the facade was a set-up, most probably by his parents in order for Kelly to be impregnated; she and her husband had tried for several years, up until a few years ago, to have another child; husband Steve had some medically sperm issues and could not get his wife Kelly pregnant. Their son Jason was having huge difficulties with girlfriends, leading to lack of performance confidence. Jason's DNA, genes, looks, blood lines and family histories would remain intact in the family and with Kelly's baby being sired by a family member, ergo their son Jason is the perfect surrogate father for his mother Kelly!!! The set-up was a perfect ruse, from the Halloween costume, his father Steve "not being able to get to the party" until AFTER his wife Kelly KNOWINGLY had their son Jason fuck her in the Wilson's bathroom; Kelly's story to her son that his father "wanted" to watch her has sex with another man, and Jason's father INSISTING on coming out of the closet EARLY though Jason had been promised his father would stay in hiding in the closet. Jason got snookered!! His mother got pregnant!!! Kelly and Steve, Jason's parents, got a new child, that Kelly made Jason PROMISE would NEVER ever be discussed!!

Personally, if I were Jason--I do not believe in blackmail--I would INSIST that I be recognized as the father of the baby, parents be damned!!! And, as a matter of principle I would not make any agreements to ever fuck my mother (aka Kelly) again (though in reality it would kill me)! That is.....IF my thesis, and the ruse of Jason, is correct. Only the writer knows for sure, but only IF another chapter is forthcoming!

If this story were to be about the Halloween Party it would have ended at the party with the Kelly (the mother finding out she had sex with her son) . This story is already started with the aftermath with the son having sex while hooded as his father (Steve) looks on and tees the action . If it were to end now Kelly will have to contend with less than satisfactory sex for life , Steve will not have the stimulation of watching Kelly with another man . Mindy and Jill will torment and make fun of their brother and friend . The son after experiencing true love will be left loveless always wanting , never getting . Too many loose ends ! More chapters needed !

Thoroughly enjoyed your submissions. "Manhood," "Nude Day," and "Halloween" are stellar. Really enjoy the way you take your time developing the store. Also the plausible character interaction and dialogue.

Any other works in the offing?

Need to continue the story!

Yup, I agree with the others you need at least another chapter to finish this story. The ending took me by surprise, nice twist. But how will daddy take it when he learns that mummy is pregnant????

I gave it just 3 stars because of the way it ended u need 2 write another chapter

One of the best stories on here.

Does anyone on here know of other Mom-son believable stories with reluctance/regret from the mother?

Some authors I've found on here that post these type of stories are:

Dick_spanker, Anal_king, Sam Jason, heyall and susanjillparker.

Could anyone please recommend some more? It is hard to find these type of stories on here nowadays.

Thanks

More, I mean with how Steve smiled knowing that his wife would not look that far outside of the home and what not. It seems Steve not only has a voyeuristic fetish, but also an incest fetish.

When I began reading this story I thought you might have had Jason fuck his sister, Mindy, at the Frat Party, but then fucking a drunk mom who thought he was his father made it seemed a bit formulaic. However, the unwanted pregnancy combined with dad wanting to see her with another guy was a wrinkle that I did not see coming and added an ending that made me want to know how Steve, Jason and Kelly resolve this and whether Steve's incest fetish brings Steve to cook up a plan for Jason and him to fuck Mindy, so the entire family is having incestuous sex.

Good story, but incomplete.

The story needs a sequel (or more).

Good Job!

4* for you!

So many possibilities for more story lines. This is too good of a story just end it like that. Fantastic beginning. Just needs a few more chapters.

Actually the very end was the very best part 5 stars for sure!!!

story and this was my second time reading it but I too thought it needed another chapter!

I really think this needed another chapter but if i am honest it also ended in a great way

part 2 dad and son dp mom

I was extremely curious what the dad's reaction was going to be, i am pleasantly surprised and liked the last line

Very enjoyable. I was surprised by the ending, it almost felt like Steve happy about it being Jason and maybe they wanted a sperm donor to get Kelly pregnant. I was hoping you were going to continue this story and maybe bring Mindy into the picture. So many possibilities. This was the second time I read this and it was every bit as good the second time around.

This is really a love story with mother and son . It would really be a shame that the mother has found the person who is able to give her orgasms would be denied . It would be better if the husband would enjoy Jason having sex with his wife . Or maybe they would like a bigger family . It is a great story and I would like it to continue .

I love this story, but I want to know what happened right after he found out that it was his son, did she tells her husband her takes of what exactly happened? Did she tells him that their son made her pregnant on Halloween night? He smiled finding out it his son: did he tells both parents that his mom took his virginity and did dad happy that his wife didn't cheat with a stranger, but their son and he is giving them a baby, which they have tried to have?X

A second chapter or simply an epilog.

The whole thing was cooked up by the mom. The dad wanted to watch her fuck another guy. He really wanted the son to do it, but Jason's too shy and would never agree to it. The mom was reluctant, but after her son fucked her to such satisfaction at the party she decided to make it happen. She made up the pregnancy story to get the son to agree and to make it urgent that they do it that night. She wasn't going to tell the dad, at least until afterward, since this was his birthday surprise. She was angry that the dad ruined the surprise and embarrassed the son, but the dad was happy that she'd arranged it just how he wanted.

The last sentence made it seem like Steve knew and maybe even wanted Jason to impregnate his Mom since Steve couldn't.But Steve wanted another child in the family.

Now I am unsure about all the background characters like Mindy,who was just a frigid college bitch who was so self-centered she couldn't keep a boyfriend,or Jill who wound up disrespecting Jason by not wanting to go to a dance with Jason.

But thankfully Mom Kelly gave Jason his first pussy action.I also think it would be fitting if Jason ended up fucking both his sister Mindy and his crush Jill,and knock them up and leave them pregnant and alone to raise their babies,also conspicuously and unsure who the Father is and having to drop-out and raise Jason's offspring.

The story is left hanging and I want to know more! Was the pregnancy a fake to manipulate the son? The dad seems surprised in a good way so maybe the story was a double blind for the son.

It has been so long that I am guessing there won't be more but the author has published recently so fingers crossed that they will return to this.

Very strange ending, it's like there is missing a page or two, unless you choose to continue it at some other time, nice story, but unfinished.

I loved the ending.

Nice story BUT you left it unfinished...again. This reminds me of the old grade school ploy during oral book report time. All one needed to do was read two-thirds of a book and during the oral presentation say "...and if you want to know what happens next, read the book!"

Where's the ending you left it unfinished

A very BAD ending. I have been left hanging. Was good til 1/2 way thru the last page. Not worth rating now. Was five stars but last page left me feeling empty (that takes away the rating).

I just read the comments below. It went right over their heads. It was a great ending. Daddy/hubby's birthday present was a great success. He had a wide smile on his face. Wifey did better than he had hoped, and now he gets sloppy seconds. I guess they must have issues with reading comprehension.

(6/2/2022) Well, this was different. Great ending. This was an enjoyable read indeed. Five stars from me. Well done and thank you.

So let me first say good story and although you ended pretty well a part of me does want to see more of this, honestly my only big wish is that we could of seen a scene where before leaving the party Jason kinda talks to Jill revealing who was in the bear costume and saying something along the lines of "im sorry micheal hasn't asked you to the dance yet, I would've if I was him but you didn't seem to care for that idea earlier so take care Jill." Obviously I'm not good at writing so maybe not exactly that but some thing short and equally as stingful as what Jill said about Jason.

I didn't care for the ending personally

5 Stars. Great story and even better ending. Thank you.

Wonderfully written and a joy to read. Thanks for taking the time to publish. 5 star

*****

Good story at first I don't know why Jason didn't reveal his identity but now it needs another chapter to explain how the dad reacted especially when he finds out about the pregnancy

I liked the story but not the ending. Although fiction, I have the following concerns: (1) No one seemed to care about Jason's emotional, psychological nor psychiatric well-being. The 1st female he has sex with is his mother, yet he lacks the maturity to stop his drunk mother from completing the act. (2) For 2 weeks after the party, he hides in his room. His mother does not speak to him. When she does, she informs him she is pregnant and he is the father, a 18 year old high school student. (3) Finally, he learns he was setup by his parents. The damage to the son's sense of self, sense of selfworth, ego, and id could be beyond repair. As someone who has no problem in real life with mutually consensual incestuous love between mentally, emotionally and psychologically mature individuals, I judgeincest stories by the preceeding standard. I would like a follow-up chapter to clarify several issues that I have raised but know it willnot happen. I rated this story 3.5 stars.

What!?! What's with the twist at the end? What is the parent's motivation? Were they trying to get pregnant or fulfill a fantasy Jason's dad has with his wife and son?

Hmm. It's clear Jason's mom, Kelly, didn't know Jason was in the teddy bear costume. Her reaction at the Halloween party confirms that. So, I'm guessing Kelly comes clean to Steve about what happened with Jason at the party. Steve then asks Kelly to fulfill his fantasy to see her have sex with another man, that man being Jason. So why was Steve surprised to find Jason was the paramour? And is Kelly actually pregnant? Or was that a pretext? Fictitious, could you throw me a hint?