All Comments on 'Hallway Hero'

excellent id love to see more could you write chapter 2 to see how things develop between these two

Cant wait for part 2

This was a good first up effort. While some of the story lacked that special something it stll had me reading it to the end. I'm sure as other stories happen and you keep writing it will become more polished. But overall I enjoyed the story and the characters.

It was a bit fast paced but otherwise, I enjoyed the overall concept. Write more and keep posting.

Minor proof reading needed, and I'd have loved to have seen some flirting between these two, maybe drawing out their affections between the rescue and the sex. However, looking at it from the "damsel in distress" view point, it was perfect timing.

This is such an amazing story. Please tell me there's more.

Loved this! The intensity of Caitlyn and Vera’s sex great. Would love to read more of their escapades. Well done :)