All Comments on 'Hammer of Darkness Ch. 02'

was a great chapter looking foward to your next one

I just found these 2 story and i must say i am looking forward to more. The characters are well thought out and fleshed out good enough that the story flows very well. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas.

...what I expected after reading the foirst part. But I really like it!

There are some issues with some words even I (als non native speaker) perceive. But they don't lessen the raw power of this story.

I really, really like it!