All Comments on 'Hands of Clay Ch. 01'

I really liked your start.

YAY. Thank you anonymous user for reading and commenting! I truly appreciate it. I hope you come back to read some more.

I clicked on this with not a lot of good expectations (just from the title), but I'd never read anything of yours and was curious...BIG MISTAKE!!! This hooked me from the very beginning and as always, ASSuming made an ASS out of me! Your writing is flawless, your imagination is stunning, your descriptions are captivatiing (though heart wrenching)...suffice it to say I'm here for the long run with this one!!

I'm very confused. You don't have any stories titled Ice Era Cronies, so I can't follow to story well. Maybe a bit of back story should be included...

I feel like a huge back story is missing. What halogens to the world and what are originals? Is it a frozen planet situation. You mention underground places to live. Id live some background. Is this part of a larger story or do i just have to wait for more