All Comments on 'Hanging Out with Ginger'

She was sitting on his shirt!

Might have been better if I would have said looks like you ran over someone. 😁

He should fuck Jennifer behind Ginger’s back

Fun erotic story. Just what Dr Ruth ordered!

R.

Part two part two part two part two

Great start. You write well, keeping a logical progression. Part 1 could be a stand alone story or a great lead in to Part 2. Would really like to see what happens in Part 2, 3, 4, etc. No matter which way the story goes, just keep being realistic and you'll have a story readers will be talking about for a long time.

your/you're

you were into instead of you was into

to/too/two

I'll work on it. Being my first storie I've found a bunch of things I wanna do better.