All Comments on 'Hanging Out with Sister-in-Law'

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

YAWN

Incest. LOL. Not hardly. BORING

1 star

DragonRider55

joey72 about 5 years agoAuthor

Re: YAWN

I can't control when the category is changed after I submit. My choice was exhibitionist.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Perfect example of why grammar is important.

Your glaring grammatical errors and lack of sex in the story made this to be quite the bore.

Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Was a good story, especially if it had been classified correctly

“No sex” doesn’t make it boring. Telling an engaging story can result in a better tale than “Dick. Pussy. Cum. Done”. I liked it. Maybe spend a little more time describing her breast to help increase the visualization, but good effort overall. Keep writing.

xxelo about 5 years ago

Sequel

Nice story, but needed a sequel!!

You finishef the story and that is a shane!!