All Comments on 'Hank's University Romance Ch. 03'

5 stars. More please!

I am not sure about this story.

Mika 100% doesn't deserve Hank, but isn't Stacey almost as bad for putting ideas in her head and also for the horrible way she treated him at first.

Stacey's saving grace is that she started warming to him(and treating him better) before she even found out the truth about the rehab centre.

So maybe she can be considered the lesser of the two evils?

Shitty

Congrats on your new story…I enjoyed it.

April602

would have like if it was a bit longer

that they do date and people from school see's them together

and meets her family

and she meets his sister

Interesting!

4

your main female characters are just dumpster fires. neither one of them had a single redeeming quality about them.

Said that at all Stacey have a good heart. But the truth is nope. She is like a yandere, she wants the boy so she will do anything. Don't be it like always the nerd guy got the hottest one. The Mika and Hank storyline was fantastic. Actually there was some definition of true love until somebody comes to meddle. Also how come mostly a boyfriend can't trust on his girlfriend to keep a secret if he talk or showed her the secret (his sister).

This story was a big improvement on your other stories. I really liked the yander like behaviour from stacey

Feelings about the ending? FLAT! ⭐⭐1/2

The story is wonderful. But I wonder just how can a person changed so much just because of incident to even betray their sibling like best friend, who they spends their entire childhood for a mere stranger ? Well, I know it's true even in reality. I was just amused at the sheer absurdity of reality.

Would love to see a part 4, a follow-up of Mika's life.

2/5

I read the full story - Ok premise and reasonably short. Story 'Geek attracts attention of one of the hottest girls on the campus, she proves to be a cheat, but she gets her even hotter and nicer friend, and they live happily ever after' badly executed:

1. Both girls start as unattainable virgin goddesses of the campus. This is in direct contradiction with 'grab for all' groping allowed

2. Virgin to slut weird Mika's transformation, with unconsumed first time with condom followed directly with 6 dicks a week bareback fuckfeast and complaining before the first time about Hank's size.

3. Inconsistent relationship between Mika and Stacey: they are either sisters-alike or queen bee - worker bee relationship.

4. Stacey - is she maturing with time (appreciating Hank etc) or not (fuck'em all advice to Mika, disclosure of Hank's sister condition)

5. Language - just for completeness. Least of my overall 2/5 concerns

In general - nice you write and share but you should pay more attention to plausibility of storyline and characters... or at least make implausibility consistent