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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ignore Cranky Nonny

Great start. Blake should give Hannah another spanking. She wants it. All submissive babes want it, but sometimes they've got be forced. Strip her nude. Spank the shit out of that ass and then fuck her good and hard!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WRITE MORE

WRITE MORE. Pretty pleaseee.

bigda68bigda68over 8 years ago
Great start

I like where this is going. There are a few typos which, perhaps, your spellchecker introduced. The dialogue is pretty compelling though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More like amazingly stupid

Make pictures of committing a crime. And the last time I looked, blackmail was illegal too. This guy is abut to spend years in prison as Bubba's Butt Bitch. Really really nuts.

No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
amazing

This is a very hot start, and I can't wait to see where it goes from here.

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