All Comments on 'Hannah and Her Sisters and Me'

Your story was very good, right up until the last paragraph...

I know it was meant as somewhat of a metaphore, but 'Cows' really???

My guess is that you may never have gotten laid in your life, & if you keep refering to women as 'cows' you probably never will.

I could only dreamed of having 3 women at 1 time especially sisters. You lucky for you.

Hannah and her sisters need to be barefoot, naked, ang pregnant at all times. Giving birth to at least 13-20 babies each for Jack. After all they are his wives, and they need to give him lots of babies.

I do think that he should have married the two other sisters to make all three of the girls equal in all ways.

fleshing out the characters and more background.... loved the concept. someone suggest me a similar story please....

However, under the circumstance thar Jack supposedly loved all three, why in the world would he refer to them as female bovine animals, rather degrading.

George in Omaha

Keep it coming

But too short. in the end one of the sisters said "own" us. So as an owner he should lay out the Pregnancies. too space them and keep the "Nookie" Cumming. and to be sure 1 to 2 our available to help with the Kids. So where's the Continuing Chapters?

just like a sorry ugly fucking digger

This sounds like an ideal of a scene that the author was in a few years ago and wish it ended up this way. The reality is the start-up was successful but not that bug of a buyout. The sisters were actually jealous of each other when the author married one of them. The restaurant was just getting by making payroll and overhead. Author is now separated from the wife and the two sister-in-laws that flirted with him now hate him.

Nothing realistic about this one unless real women are involved. Real women don't want sex very often. Women of literotica want sex constantly, except for wives and girl friends that get dumped (Rare). One man might be able to handle a literotica woman, maybe. NEVER three...that's reality so maybe a fantasy literotica man...that can make an elephant grunt LOL!!!

And 3 gorgeous women.

Will there be more?