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All Comments on 'Hannah Gets a 2 for 1 Massage'

by oldMasseuseGuy

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PrfsrPrfsralmost 3 years ago

You kept switching from past to present tense, sometimes in the same sentence. There are several other errors here too.

oldMasseuseGuyoldMasseuseGuyalmost 3 years agoAuthor

I am no English major as you can tell. but did you enjoy the story? Do you want to see what happens next?

Do you any story ideas that you care to share?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

pretty good! some regular english cleanup could be used but very nice! maybe for part 3 the intern at the front could help out with the massage too?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great but part 1 was better. Would like Al and Hannah to possibly visit a strip club or swingers club

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72 yr old still get horny and think of sex (too much?0 I am a big reader of sex (and many other things) I am retired from a 45-year career in the computer field. I have traveled all over the US due to the position I held (not sales). I do not cheat but I do appreciate talking...