All Comments on 'Hans' Maids - Pt. 02: The Young One'

This is a beautiful story. I was transported to a strange land of monsoons and exotic women. I almost felt I was reading Graham Greene, only without the underlying tension of international politics casting a dark cloud over the two (or three) lovers' passion filled rusts.

Reading this story offered a different experience from my usual raids of the Erotica cabinet on this site. It reminds me that there are some damned fine writers that pop up here every so often. This tale and others like it ask only your indulgence, and should be (I believe) acknowledged for their efforts to go beyond cheap gratification rips and to offer a taste of the actual craft of writing.

I appreciate the effort that has been spent in the writing of this tale.

5 stars from me.

many thanks, Max

Well told, slow pace that lets the emotions build, great characters, no confusion about who is the protagonist at any moment. Since you obviously work to a higher level of English than is typical today, I offer this: one labium, two labia.

Excellently written and with real passion, well done

Top tier quality story !