All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

Kinda kinky- I mean, armpit fucking? Love the vivid descriptions of their anal sex and her pushing out his cum from her asshole. This story just made me an anal lover more than ever- and kind of apprehensive about what my boyfriend will get me for my birthday!

Good action and pace, but the story really needs to be proof read and edited. The minor grammatical and spelling glitches stop the flow of the story so the reader can discern what the author really meant to say when the words are wrong, misspelled or out of order.