All Comments on 'Happy Birthday Ch. 06'

Time for an anatomy class and an editor....is this meant to be alien sex?

Hey there, Squish here! Thanks for reading my story!

Just gonna pop in and remind people, if you like what you see, you can check out my patreon (https://www.patreon.com/AdmiralSquish) for early access and progress reports, and if you just wanna throw me a tip without committing to a pledge, I've got a Ko-fi too (https://ko-fi.com/admiralsquish)!

And if you didn't like it, well... you were warned. It's right up there at the very top, unrealistic anatomy.

At the beginning he seemed like a nice guy, but as the chapters have gone on he's just been revealed as an narcissistic, sexist jerk.

Fuck, that was a sexy story!!!

I just finished reading this, and it was awesome. I loved your presentation of John and hhis sexual prowess.

If it's possible, can you finish the story? You've still got 2 more aunts and 6 more cousins. Plus his mom and sisters. And maybe some other characters like Dani? I would love to read more about John and his family. But overall, a fantastic story.

It goes on and on and on…