All Comments on 'Happy Birthday Darling'

Great story but you keep changing from past to present tense. Editing would help.

I went into past tense just to give a little back ground for the story. Thank you for the comment,

I thought you were right on with the way you told the story. Please keep writing. I have a lot of stories that you wrote still to read.

I liked it.

Thank you very much, in total I have 56 stories on the site, some are better than others.