All Comments on 'Happy Birthday, Jason. Jacqueline'

Needs a part three.

I like your style of writing. The story flows nicely.

Hate the plot twist here. The therapist is fucking 2 of her patients?? And of course he follows his dick seeing nothing wrong about the situation. Not sure I believe too many 18 year olds would not feel betrayed and manipulated. Why do people forget teen boys are not only horny, but quick to anger too. I'll wait for you next story line

I'm sure you could turn this into a lovely story... if there was any kind of explanation for why this is happening, or some kind of buildup, or more than the absolute minimum wordcount required to be posted.

Right now, it feels like this would be better placed in the "Story Ideas" forum.

Awesome wish there were more chapters