All Comments on 'Happy Birthday, Kid'

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Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 9 years ago
Awkward narration.

It reads like you were watching something on television or reading a comic book and tried to describe what you saw. Basically, this read like a book report.

alecknight66alecknight66over 9 years ago
really ?

THE NAKED MAN.... nice one

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