All Comments on 'Happy Birthday, Love'

Awful !!

Don't like the way that she ignored hubby and didn't even ask if it was OK

That is not the way it is done

Great birthday, he finds out that she has already been having a long-term affair and that now they plan to bring it forward to the world. He gets to be laughed at and mocked. Her friends seem to be happy about it and have already discounted the husband.

Pathetic little man. Doesn’t deserve to have a wife.

total garbage and not worth even skimming.

No aftermath. She never acknowledged her husband, even to the point of demeaning him and declaring where have you been my whole life? The pathetic cuck has lost her.

Yeah, the change is called divorce. Duh. Lol

Stop this foolish writing. Leave, please. Most participants here have at least a modicum of talent. We do not need empty-headed fluff from the illiterates.

Your story is a piece of shit and so is your writing.

You said that he "put the bottle 'in' the table"

Did he dribble it 'in' or pour it all a once.

HOT story!!!!!!! Well done! Congrats!

Let's see what happens next... ;)

Ignore the cuck theme trolls. Great story with lots of potential for future chapters. Keep writing and enjoying your themes! I did.

Total bullshit story that could only be written by a true life cuckboy.

Awesome! Ignore the haters and keep this going!

So, either that's all there is -- and it isn't much -- or you set up Chapter 2 but care so little about your own story you couldn't be bothered to use a chapter number in the title to warn it wasn't a complete story. Either way, it's an easy rating of 1.

I think he should go ahead and clean out his closet and leave the title to the house on the table as he leaves. He obviously will not be needed by his loving wife anymore. Since this dipshit is so happy giving her away he should be delirious that she will be fucking his friend exclusively from now on.

Cheap, cheating bitch made him a cuck for his birthday.

Didn't like it at all!

Why are some of you guys so angry? Chill out boys, no one’s forcing you to read it all!

I’m trying to be surprised but yet again another pointless story. In a category that hates cheating wife’s . Totally ironic a newbie trying to bait the readers of the loving wife category who love to read BTB stories. Now this feels like déjà vu this is garbage and this writer knows it. Instead of writing a great story and putting it into say the group or the exhibition/voyeur category’s no they put a complete pile of pointless garbage into a category that hates these kind of stories. I ask do you get a kick from baiting people or are you lazy person who doesn’t check their work. You could have put this into a different category and got a better response from readers who do like to read this kind of thing. You show that you have talent at writing but obviously you don’t check your own work. But please do everyone a favour leave the loving wife category alone go try other categories you have a thing for wife sharing so go play in the group category or the exhibition/voyeur category. Because the loving wife category definitely doesn’t work for you ok

Excellent! I and several of my good friends have fucked a man while their husbands' watched, just to please them. I doubt that it is highly uncommon, especially when the new man is very pleasing in appearance and fully satisfies the wife. Keep writing, and delete the hateful, non-literary related comments.

Boring 😴

Don't listen to the cuck shaming trolls, I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story with plenty of potential. Don't let the cucks who demand BTB scare you, they're all just bitter because they got cheated on and didn't have the balls themselves to do anything about it as their SO laughed in their face.

Stick with the alpha team that like to see cucks get cucked.

Part 2 is really in order

A cuck writer and a cuck story.....the cuck commentators are easily pleased

reminded me of n incident between my best friend nd my wife. we had both known him for years and he made no secret of his desire for my wife. she commented several times about the large bulge in his jeans and one drunken evening decided to pull his jeans down to take a look. He is very well endowed which i am not and much to her delight she ended up totally naked being fucked by him while i watched. Afterwards she told me she had never felt so filled up and it was the best sex she had ever had.

Yet another mc cuckold and extremely unrealistic I would have never agreed to this and killed them both for it

And again another person who doesn't know the meaning of loving wife

Didnt even want to spit-roast the slut? Hubby is a loser. Salsa dancing in leather all night? What a sweaty betty she’d be.

Ignore the trolls, this is HOT!

Was HOT! Can’t wait for the next part where he learns never set her up with someone more perfect for her the him

So she's gone ... until a guy with that cock and a better job walks by.

He can now shop 21-yr-old chicas as an established man [in another city].

Oh…great night!

For …all!

Sorry. No involvement with husband as it plays out

Stupid. Divorce most likely.

Stupid. Had a perfect wife and he gave her away. He will never satisfy her again. He'll be lucky if she stays with him.

I love this story! It's so hot and so close to a fantasy I have about my wife and one of her colleagues, I'd love to watch them together for the first time like that.

I hope you treat us to part 2!

Kretyn i idiota.

10 Big Blazing stars, for the writer. Hot story but even tho I have shared ALL my women something about this story made it seem like he lost his wife. Maybe it was because she exchanged phone numbers, maybe because she ignored hubby completely, something didn't fit with a good loyal wife. Hood effort. Thanks Buster2U

You did a good job putting this story together. Two things suggest that this narrative was pretty well written (at least for me), the sex was pretty hot and I got sad for the husband. He obviously enjoyed watching. Not my cup of tea, but to each their own. It really seemed as if he lost the wife. I doubt he'll ever really have her again after she's experienced her "holy grail." There seemed to be real connection and passion between Victor and the wife. My understanding of cuckold relationships is the wife gets new experiences AND she's turned on by her partner getting his desires as well. She not only never checked to see if hubby was good, but rather didn't give hubby a second thought..... downright forgot he existed. One has to weave a good tale to draw a reader in to this extent.

Really, how can even a cuck enjoy wife saying, "Where have you been all of my life?" she whispered to him. What an usual author / person that can enjoy that on your birthday. Well, all I can say is Yuck. Nothing falls so short of love and closeness between a husband and wife then that. I'm not afraid to say it, the whole cuck thing is just totally weird and I don't get it and I don't want too.