All Comments on 'Happy Cuckold'

Finally a story about the supposed loser that ends up being the winner. This is a great chance for a second chapter to show the outcome of what happens after the divorce is over and how his ex wife has changed. Only a thought.

Over the top. But cute. Definitely enjoyed this story.

keep the story going. have one of the woman become a mistress to the other woman I also think it be hot if the black woman peg dan and have it be a roleplaying her being a slave getting over on her master.

Why the fuck did you think naming the other guy "Eric Garner" and throwing in random references to smoking was a good idea?

I love your world Crazy Dave.

Great change of pace on the normal cuckold story. Would love next chapter to include Dan taking their ass cherries. Also, have Irene and Emma do more than rub each others clits.

Not your best story. Just didn't flow smoothly and had too many huh moments. Gave up after his MIL told him to fuck her.

Okay, I like the idea of an unwitting cuckold getting back at his wife, but this is pure garbage. It was incredibly rushed, the prose was quite a bit uneven, the characters were unrealistic, the motivations weren't believable, and the outcomes were entirely too convenient. You need to learn subtlety in a bad way. 1/5

Keeping it going. You have to add more chapters to this great story. Quite different than other story on literotic.

I agree with the other comments about the dialogue and motivation being unbelievable but why split everything evenly if he had a prenup I didn't get that ... amongst other things.

OK you mentions too many SHE LOVES IT but otherwise better and grafic than other stories. Like i say this was interesting!

I think rodryder44 said it best another 5* performance

What a roller coaster ride, hilarious

1 star for such a deeply ending..

Overall an ok story though it could use some polish. Also, the ending seemed incomplete. Other than getting divorced, what happened? Really could use a sequel or at least an epilog. If so I would have raised the score from 3 to 5

This is what William S Burroughs' erotica might have read like without drugs.

good story

Ok story, but it's missing an ending.

The story is so deliberately unbelievable and lacking interest that I could not finish to read the ending that others have criticized.

Jesus… really? Characters speak and interact like a 13 year old imagines adults do.

Fantasy writer for the mail ego.

This was a profoundly stupid waste of time. Immature drivel, poorly written.

"More cuck drivel. Can't stand it. I guess someone likes it, but not for me. Seems like slow suicide with a butter knife. Bleeaack. Yuck. I have to go wash my brain now."

You put that comment on my story and then wrote THIS?! LOL!

I do like your story.

It gives the cuckold a little dignity back to find his own woman and dump his wife; but it looks like it's just trading one problem for another.

Is there a part 2?!!

Cuck drivel? Not really; cuckold usually indicates some level of desire or acceptance by the cuckold. No acceptance here, just movin' on.

Would have line liked to have more reaction and dialog between Eric and Michelle when the divorce papers were served. Certainly could support a follow-up story with points of is. Would be fun to see Terri visit the mom.

Mfj

(11/18/2022) To say this narrative needs work is an understatement. It does sound like a grade school play. Great concept, the cheated hubby ending up with a harem. But with absolutely no follow-through.

Not bad. Great concept. Needs chapter-2 to follow up with all the carnage left behind. In addition, what type of devastation the two infidels experienced. Find out if the PreNup was enforced. What did each of the scum cheaters loose in the process. How many children were the result of the new and improved relationships?

So, please write a second chapter?

Well, that was a fun read!

I think your stories are some of the best defense against the lies and propaganda about men being willing cucks, which no real man would ever be. I just wish you could write a story where a MC get to out his whore wife get some revenge and a divorce without sacrificing any of his morals, honor or self-respect, and truthfully violence doesn't require any as nothing has more worth in life, so intern it is violence worthy.

Very nice. Goes from slut to a harem!!!

A nice parody of a Loving Wives story. Not so great if you meant it as a non-spoof type story...

Stupid and ridiculous story.

This was honestly stupid with the direction you took it the story was bad enough without you adding the extra kink in with the added kink you just made it worse no 1 wanted to read about that it's why we wasn't reading interracial stories from that category we wanted to read a incest story only that's why people read incest stories they don't want to read about sex outside of the family when we are reading incest stories

Absolutely crazy! Nice story telling. It's everybody's dream: The women get a good cock without having to be rubbed raw every day, and the guy gets 3 beautiful women.

So... let's find me 3 women who want this!