All Comments on 'Happy Ending Ch. 04'

by tcwild100

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DidaktylosDidaktylosover 12 years ago
I think it could have done with more editing

Why the jumps between 1st and 3rd person narrative without warning? And why has Ray become Rod?

2hot2m82hot2m8over 10 years ago
SWEET

I'm Ready to Squirt in her Ass! That's hot!

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