All Comments on 'Happy Holidays, Damn It!'

Keep up the great work. We need more like this!

Glad you liked it. Keep giving me feedback on the stories of mine that you read, even if you don't like them... I like knowing what people think so I can give them more of what they like.

kinda like your stories but the sex scenes should be more descriptive, just reading a fucks b , c fucks d , e licks c and every one orgasms isnt an exciting read

Thanks for the feedback. Will take that under advisement and try to write more exciting sex scenes in the future... one thing I definitely don't want my stories to be is boring.

This was hilarious

I can't get the stars to light up but loved the story. Stop rushing thru and too many characters. Confusing who's doing what to whom. Also need more of Mary's thoughts and feelings. Good story

i think your stories are hot and I don't mind that the sex scenes are quick. But I agree that it gets confusing who is doing who, so maybe longer scenes and fewer characters would help.

Keep the feedback coming, it's very helpful. I'm struggling through some writer's block right now, but when I do start posting stories here again I'm going to use the advice I'm getting in these comments.

I, for one, will kill the race of Happy Holidayers and their demon spawn. Please say it every Christmas season so the cleansing can begin...

The wiitches are right!. Mary was treated to the correct punishment.Instead of being a religious fanatic she had her virginity taken so she became a woman and learned all the things a women needs to know ,fucking,sucking,being fucked in all three holes,how to orgasm and give orgasms and BDSM training besides.Now she's happy,has five new fuckbuddies and ,as a result learned her to be friendly and quit looking down her nose at others except when big dicks and pretty pussys were in sight.Oh yeah-Happy Holidays!!!

They had no right those witches forced it on her there was no where in the story that said anything to them, so which was wrong here they were.I'm pretty tolerent of witches but what they did was cruel and merry Christmas

...but the premise kinda sucked.

What if she had been saying,"Happy Kwanzaa" or "Happy Hanakuh?" Or "Merry Solstice?" Would she still have been pushing her religion's views?

I find it strange you chose this premise, it tells me an awful lot about the writer.

So...not a bad story, just a silly short one that was very preachy. Keep writing though, you got a good amount of spirit.

Pure and total crap. Sorry I wasted any time reading this.