All Comments on 'Hard Day in the Big Easy'

As a single story I'm afraid this is not good. That being said, if this is the introduction to a character you plan to develop, it works. I gave it a 3 and hope you have more on the way.

Very well written and very arousing as well. I liked the story very much and hope you will continue.

That was awesome! Loved it. Good job. I want her to do it again!