All Comments on 'Hard Landing Ch. 04'

Once again, great display of story building. You're a talented writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. Bring it soon!!

This is a really good read. The characters are well drawn and the story flows. It's emotional and rewarding, and the sex is just icing on the cake.

I'm definitely a sucker for well-written relationships - particularly when the drama involved doesn't involve violence and infidelity - and this story fits the bill perfectly. Add in the heat and... damn.

So good! Thank you!

Chapter 04 is a continuation of your awesome writing style and character expansion, with Steve and Sara becoming more connected in the story line. The emotions between Jo / Blue are just awesome, with their ever evolving sharing of their past, which has experienced both low & high points. I read quite a few lesbian love stories on the Nifty & Literotica Sites, with Hard Landing certainly being in the all time Top-5 .

Am anxiously awaiting chapter 05 of Hard Landing

Billyslate,

This story showed great promise from the beginning and there is no doubt that it is an excellent piece of work worth more than five stars. I just hope that your Muse doesn't let you down.

When Jo goes after Blue. You are handling this so pitch perfect. I am beginning to think there may be a song in the future from our favorite guitar player.

With each chapter your talent for writing shines brighter and brighter. Well worth a 5 ⭐️ rating.

LOVE! I feel so attached to Jill & Jo now.

I am absolutely loving this series! It’s so well written. You have a fantastic talent. I can’t wait for the next part. I hope you post it soon. Much love and many thanks! EEP!!

Whoever posted the “Eep” comment wins my favorite comment award.

Loving this series, eagerly awaiting each new chapter. Reading lesbian erotica, I'll cry at surprise proposals and happy endings, but, “Someone’s mom. And it just clicked. I’m there to get these people out. It’s my job. Before that I was a good pilot but nothing special...." had me looking for a tissue. Because you have me invested in the characters, just really good writing.

... if Chapter 5 doesn't arrive soon, I will probably die. Please save me. It's your job.

OK, that probably won't really happen, but I don't think I have been more invested in a set of characters in, well ... ever. I want to meet them, talk to them, be their friend. I want to live in their world and smile as I watch them fall in love.

You have given us a great gift. Please give us another one. And, you know, hurry.

I'm looking forward to many more chapters of this story

This story is so very awesome! I've been avidly reading the chapters as soon as I found them, and find myself chomping at the bit for the next one to come out. Thank you so very much for sharing this with us!

I honestly feel this story gets better with each chapter and can't wait to read the next one.

is pretty damned cute.

Just sayin' :).

I'm with electricblue, loved the scene where they were talking about the windows facing the beach and hearing the Eep! So glad I found this story Broken. I've got to get an account and put you in with my favs.

J

Wow, great read! Love the accuracy of the places, military jargon, and the clink of the bikini bottom rings hitting the pool side concrete. Great details, but not lost in them.

Hey Spokes, I posted the EEP comment to show how well I love your story. I don't know any higher praise.

I love the conversations that Blue and Jo have, even during the intimate moments. The fact that they joke around in the middle of these times is great. I also really love the conversations that Jo has with herself!

You're bringing in such a range of emotions between Jo and Jill as they explore their relationship. I love the "Eep" that Jill gives when excited as well as the effect of biting her neck.

It's a well balanced and well written story. 5 stars.

That was definitley an absurd overreaction. Also... Jill's fault for leaving it out there in the first place if its that sore a spot. When I have something that delicately personal I hang on to it like an extra limb. Jill needs to at least match that apology she got from Jo.

As we get later and later into the story I get more and more nervous for the conflict that I know has to be coming. I dont want the good vibes to end!

"... Jill's fault for leaving it out there in the first place"

Using that logic, we should all be in the right to go through any purse that is left unguarded.

Utter rubbish

I agree with Rastanura, 10 EEPS!

Jo is so hot.

10/10 Eeps

God, I hope you don't just give Jo and Blue a great 69 off-screen, or something like that! Jesus! If Jill is going to accept e.g. an apology delivery to her clit over this, don't we deserve to be there?