All Comments on 'Hard To Sell Tile Bent Over'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Boring

No flow,or continuity. It lacks detail, and expression. Also the description while hot does not match the story, I was looking forward to a young salesman getting taken on the sales floor almost against his will. That would be hot, this barely lukewarm.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
could've been much more

Good foundation for what you'd hope to be a great sex scene, but very little of substance as the story progresses.

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